Dhua Dhua Sa Rhne Do... Poem by Sonali Ganguly

Dhua Dhua Sa Rhne Do...

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ye dhua dhua sa rehne do.
palko me naami aur
bikhre huye alfaz rehne do.
naa jane ye pal hai thehra kyun?
dhankane khamosh aur goom ye fiza kyun?
chalne ko saath to puri kayenaath hai.
par aaj hume yun tanha hi rehne do....

Ye dhua dhua sa rehne do.
chahat ki raho me
ya yaadon me khoye rehne do.
dhundli ye parchai kyun lagti apni kyun?
uljhe huye se rishte aur hai berang ye duniya kyun?
sapno ke dayere me to har pal khushnuma hai.
par aaj hume khud se khafa hi rhne do.

ye dhua dhua sa rehne do.
zindagi ko suni aur es dard ko dil me rehne do.
khoi huyi si hai ye manzil kyun?
jhoothe wo waade ab bhi laagte sache kyun?
un khwabon ko tut kar bikhar jane do.
bas, ye dhua dhua sa rehne do.

Dhua Dhua Sa Rhne Do...
Saturday, April 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: misty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this poem two years back on my own birthday. the words directly came from my heart to me while i was traveling to sambalpur. i was in a melancholic mood. the lines expresses my feelings on that day. i simply scribbled down what came to my mind.... later i found it has taken the shape of a poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 09 April 2016

Wah wah...Kya baat hai. Maza aagaya padh kar....Loved it, Sona.10++++

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Sonali Ganguly 09 April 2016

thank you very much sir....

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Abhipsa Panda 04 December 2018

no words mam...simply awesome and of course 10

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Sonali Ganguly 12 April 2019

Thanks dear friend

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2022

ye dhua dhua sa rehne do. zindagi ko suni aur es dard ko dil me rehne do....excellent.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2022

dhundli ye parchai kyun lagti apni kyun? Fantastic discovery though not Eureka!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 April 2019

You might like to read my translation of your poem captioned Let My Misty Mind Misty Remain

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 April 2019

chalne ko saath to puri kayenaath hai. par aaj hume yun tanha hi rehne do.... par aaj hume khud se khafa hi rhne do.... Brilliantly penned.

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Savita Tyagi 13 April 2019

Beautiful Gazal. words that come from heart touch the other hearts without any effort. Thanks for sharing. Loved the picture.

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