Dhuk Dhuk Please Go Away! ! Poem by Adroit Angel

Dhuk Dhuk Please Go Away! !



dhuk dhuk! that hollow sound coming from so deep
making the screwed phases unfortunately weep
always makes its exit without bidding farewell
irritably comes back with no hint of grovel
it's ludicrous to know there's no complete stop
to the mockery that would never turn out a flop
the soul hidden i don't know where it lies
hits me aimlessly with those frustrated cries
i would pray every night for an easy escape route
monotonously gives back a dirty handful of soot
guessing its up to me to stop these bloody marks
will get me rid of all these peripheral barks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ludicrous Angel 09 March 2012

wow i didn't realize most of that. but thank you! ! ! your poems are very well written.

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Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.please read some of mine.

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