I came into your life-
You invited me,
Or I elbowed my way in
Or fate threw us together-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I leave a mark?
I came into your heart-
You let me in,
Or I pestered you
Till you finally opened up-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I make a mark?
I came into your mind-
You let me in,
Or I pestered you
Till you could think of little else-
Nevertheless, I entered…
But did I leave a mark?
I love this this poem it is discussing wheter you entered into something voluntarily or involuntarily which doesn't matter but did I make a difference or change is what will always be important ;)
Greetings......lovely work, I love the piece. short, to the point but makes you wonder, yet makes you smile. beautiful.
A lovely, refreshing idea that you have expressed very well poetically. Very nice indeed.10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the question u insisted on asking is quite convencing.the technique u used is promising and encouraging for the start of a brilliant poet. thanks for sharingdear poet