Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 8,190 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Did I? - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Curiosity often surrounded us,
Whenever we were together.
I felt happiness on seeing you.
We worked together for many days,
But never ever proposed each other.
But your each heartfelt,
words did bring us closer.
Was my cut short attitude did keep you away from me.
or was it the friendship existed between you and me.
The way you helped me, some closeness I felt.
But you never approached me in that sense.
Many times I asked myself.
Did I?
Then reverted back
How can I?
Did my behaviour or words,
Sowed a seeds of love in you.
Which I never thought of it so.
Did I unknowingly do it.

The last you came to say
Bye..
Why I felt a sadness
Was it just my thought.
We were quiet free to each other.
If there's anything I would have known.
or may be my strict behaviour can be held responsible.
But I cant change
Myself..

But a question left in my mind....
Did I?

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© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Did I? by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 16,108 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (10/11/2014 1:13:00 PM)

    Feelings of emotions very well expressed.......Geetha.......a very well crafted piece with loving words (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 544 Points Silvi Tripathy (10/4/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    Awesome.A very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/27/2013 9:27:00 PM)

    Nicely composed poem..I must rate it 10/10: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/27/2013 3:32:00 PM)

    Especially poetic and delicate in love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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