Did You Think? Poem by Tori Fleck Fournelle

Did You Think?

Rating: 5.0


Did you think that
I was gonna wait for you
Did you think that
I was gonna leave it all behind for you
Did you think at all?

I left for a reason mom,
So, I didn't have to hear anymore
of your pathetic lies
So, I could see the better side of life.

I'm waiting and watching again
To see what is your screwed up plan
is this time
Because, when you think you can make it through
without messing up you life even more
you always, for some reason,
find a way to fall right back down
And you call for help
But, no one hears
Because, you didn't care and cherish them
So, they just backed out of your life

Did you ever think of that?
Or did you think
that everyone would be at your side?
Well, that's a lie.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
syaz wafea 26 August 2009

wow..is this really how u feel? ? nicely written..rlly xpress ur true feelings

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DaNa XxX 26 September 2009

really well written...you know thats what i like about poetry..you can express you feelings...and for us (readers) we can feel your feelings (ur anger) ... this poem is awesome.. ^_^ 10/10 DaNa...

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Winnie Angel 06 September 2009

Well written a frank straight expression of anger..sometimes we need to express our feel clearly so that the person comes to know abt his/her fault.....winnie

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Tyease Collins 06 September 2009

I can feel the...anger...the...passion in this piece. Freakin awesome poem -Ellie

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Tori Fleck 27 August 2009

yeah this is how I've felt for years!

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Nangula Immanuel 26 August 2009

That's the beauty of poetry, you can express yourself! In this poem, one can see the anger, the wanting to understand, wanting answers. Really nice! : -)

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