i was living in the darkness where no's one there
i cried so loudly but no one cares..
i rose my head up to see the blue sky but it was grey..
...
here i'm drowning in the tears of my memory...
wondering thinking who i'm gonna be...
that because when you left you tooke a big part of me...
...
you and me..
how couldnt you see..
that we are meant to be..
...
as i was walking the birds were singing above me
the weather is so nice and the blue sky is all i can see
looking at the flowers dancing with the wind breeze
...
remeber when we first met
we acted like we knew each other for a long time
and everytime you come around
the happiness inside of my heart make stand for you and smile
...
I've chosen a way to go
before I really knew...
That I can't go back
even if I wanted to...
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i see the dark clouds coming up again
the drops fall slowly then it begun to rain
but its ok let it fall down on me
and let it wash every single memory
...
i used to read poetry alot but i never try to write one...untill i sign up here so i just wanted to give it a chance hopping poeple will like it.. ^__^)
*~*~my Wake Up Call~*~*
i was living in the darkness where no's one there
i cried so loudly but no one cares..
i rose my head up to see the blue sky but it was grey..
i didnt say anything cause i didnt know what to say..
day by day was passing me by
and i thought its the time to say goodbye..
but then a strange voice was calling my name
i wanted to follow it but i was afraid it was a flame..
i didnt have so many choices so i tried to give it a chance..
i left my weakness behind me cause i wanted to take a glance..
when i reached out and touched the sky
i realize that it was real so i couldnt deny..
the voice was you after all
so i thank you for being my wake up call..
Dana, has very classical qualities about her work. even Dean Koontz, a good friend of mine. told me she was going down the road to success and fame. I totally agree with him on this. and her personality is as charming and sweet as can be. I one day will obtain a autographed poem from her. good people always stick together.. Keep up the good work Dana.. your true friend William