Any beautiful thing
in the world
means nothing
if not shared
with somebody loved.
Yet, if the loved one's hand
we are to hold
for any other beauty
we're almost
without sight
..Mostly blind..
What shall we choose:
The loved one's beauty
or the World's?
We are almost without sight......that dilemma comes in mind and bring hurdles in decision making. Very nice poem that transfer suitable message. Nice job.
The girl has grown to be a phenominal women! sister, thanks for this thought provoking poem...Siya_! !
Great poem, Elena. So true. What is beauty if we cannot share it with a loved one. Love in the beauty of nature, sounds like paradise but you are also right that if we are very much IN love sometimes we have not eye for nature anymore. Thought provoking. Nicely written.
I love this, a great poem and there's good mind to link between thought and problem..it just good one..i agree with Sabi, he's right..the world's beauty is include the loved one and the one you scare most hahahaha..joking_Unwritten Soul
Being Without Both is not completed to live growing older and older. How phylosophycal of you it is! ! I do like it! ! ^^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Just see the beauty of the world, the loved one's eyes, and, also see the beauty of the world through them. Try to let the loved one do the same thing, too. @@ See?