Disappointment Poem by Tori A. Haynes

Disappointment

Rating: 5.0


When I am sad or something is wrong,
it's because of a disappointment.
It's been 12 years and sometin always goes wrong.
I wonder the two people who made me,
Where are they?
Did I do sometin wrong?
But it's okay,
because there is not gonna be any more disappointments anymore.
I'm tired of crying every night over something I cannot help.
I'm tired of being angry over something I didn't do.
Don't worry because there are not going to be any more disappointments.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Shetty 09 June 2008

keep writing tori.... i would love to be reading them....... i think u've got talent..... don't blame urself for anything that wasnt ur fault... i can c dat u r in a happy family now... cheer up girl...... :) take care.....

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Bob Gibson 16 May 2008

Tori! let your self go in your poems! you have held back, rewrite it! using the samef eeling of dissapointment! write when you are angry! regards Bob

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Tori A. Haynes

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Montgomery, Alabama
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