Disco Ball (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Disco Ball (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


fascicle of lights
fall upon the walls—I dream
of Winter's snowflakes

Friday, October 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lights,perception,snow,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

Disco Lights Tumbling Upon Darkened Walls like disco lights in coloured cascades tumbling upon darkened walls my youthful mind whirls escapes through walls filters into snowflake crystals minds glorious globe trances adores filtered waxing images through limitless mindscapes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Disco Ball' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 18 November 2015

as Disco lights, in coloured cascades, tumbling upon darkened walls, my youthful mind whirled, escaped through walls filters, into snowflake crystals, of the minds glorious trances... again I return to adore your images filtered through my mind 10+ :)

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2015

Superb Haiku........Great imagery and nicely thought.10

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