I am on heaven's door, everytime you look at me
I am one step closer to a different reality
Steeped in ecstasy, I do not even have the words to best describe
what you do to me.
I come undone
Just when I thought I have a clue on what you are
A discovery so inconsistent from how you make me feel
It leaves me reeling from grief, inconsolable - just let me be.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ouch! I was lifted by the first 4 lines - only to be dumped hard on the floor by the next 4! Clearly this was exactly as it was for you and you have created it beautifully for us too. (PS you need to make it 'describe' in line3)