Distances! Poem by Somia Race

Distances!

Rating: 4.5


Distances making me go crazy
assemblng moments without u
Moments making me mad
Going ur way but attempt of suicide

How long it may last?
Nuthng just few more breaths of me
Never know wht it gona grasp
Few tendrness of miles

Making my way blue slim
Roads passing… making another wedge stone
Wedge of curves to a gloomy way
Gloomy way of signs bright
How long it may last?

Just another twinkling of eye
Moments of urs sweet Although insane
Turning my way few words of ur divine
No sweetnes no hotness
Unless u groove da flame
Sighs flying n making me go divine

Can it make me go high?
Can it make me fly?
To anoder world of divine
Where life can reach
Teaching me steps of ur presence
Lying in tub…. thinking of U

Making my momnts shine
Swalllowing the grindstone
Distances making me go crazy
U never departed it
But making a hope of dreams
Distances making me go crazy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jodie Cooper 10 January 2012

we all live in moments but they are just pebbles needed to be realesed into the water if nt they will pull you under.

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2010

Making my momnts shine Swalllowing the grindstone Distances making me go crazy U never departed it But making a hope of dreams Distances making me go crazy very nice...clearly heart felt.... cheers

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Grant Stevenson 02 July 2010

We live in moments Reality is immediate A moment in time is an emotion I feel different to yesterday I will feel different again tomorrow An emotion is reality only in the moment We live in moments

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