Satish Verma

Gold Star - 5,151 Points (5-6-1935)

…… Distant Shores - Poem by Satish Verma

Twilight song of a cuckoo
taps the window softly.
Gothic tree and drooping sky
humble my thoughts.
Past was me.
I will know then
why your hills turned away my clouds
by shifting sands.

Was it a colossal guilt of tomorrow?
Which never wanted to become present
and enter my house.
But my memory was sharp
and days were numbered.

I wanted to invite the death discreetly
while praising the life and listening to birds
without dropping the history
from my crooked fingers.

Between yourself and myself
a sea was surreptitiously raging.
The waves were dividing the shores.

Comments about …… Distant Shores by Satish Verma

  • Bert Bell (10/11/2010 1:50:00 PM)

    Very nice indeed. Beautiful use of descriptive language and metaphor. (Report) Reply

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  • Nikunj Sharma (8/12/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    wonderfully written, quite stimulating. Readers shall run out of words of praise, as each of your poem is a marvel.........pls read my poem called CAN I BE A POET TOO? (Report) Reply

  • Ridge Cahill (1/9/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    Simply riveting. To think death discreet and wish its invite as such is beautifully said. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Jay P. Narain (7/16/2008 9:52:00 PM)

    Varma ji, your poems are great. I enjoy reading them. Thanks and keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Subbaraman N V (6/16/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    Great communion with nature! (Report) Reply

  • Sabrina G (11/3/2007 11:35:00 PM)

    Verma dear, this poem caught my heart's attention. (Report) Reply

  • Goldy Locks (10/14/2007 11:46:00 AM)

    you're a stimulating writer.

    keep on
    SusxGLx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011

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