Between father and son
spiritual DNA crosses over
untold stories of war
raise armies in sinews
wisdom of centuries
sneaks into existence
in declamations, declarations or
just mere admission of love
[ Inspired by Hamid Kareem's poem]
Small and beautiful, a non-typical content is used, interesting. Love to add 10.
thanks for your comments, i have been reading your work.......loved it and this is my fav
wow. Congratulations, this is the best poem i've read today. So much natural truth is captured in these so few lines. Our DNA builds us, and makes us who we are. I try and touch on this theme quite a bit, but I dare say you have done it much more succinctly. Great one.10/10
Could explain the George Bush I & II War Strategy....Very Nicely Done, Rehan. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Perhaps.. but as I mentioned somewhere else before tonight it may just have something to do with zygotic gene effects... particularly if you are talking war...