Don'T Let Me Go Yet Poem by nameless sorrow

Don'T Let Me Go Yet

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i promised to take care of you
i promised you the world
but for all that i promised.
i haven't kept my word.

i have been too bussy
that is what i say
but nothing is a good enough excuse to stay away.

i am trying again, give me another chance.
i will make the deadlines.
i will learn to dance.

don't let me go.
don't leave me behind.
i'm trying to come back
so we can be like we were...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is for my sister. Lately, i've been a bit out of whack.. to bussy with work, and deadlines that i forget the deadlines i promised her. I've been to caught up in my own life i hadn't even realised the pain she's been going through. I've been self-centered and mean, and even though she will deny it, i know it's true. I love her too much to leave without a fight, and i only just realised that i've had to. I haven't been given a good start, but i'm going to try.

I love you, sis! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 18 July 2012

I liked this one a lot! Particularly the line 'I will learn to dance'...lol Nice flow!

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Jeffenise Robertson 18 July 2012

It's obviously on your heart to make things right, I hope she forgives you..

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