Done My Best And Tried So Hard Poem by ethan cox

Done My Best And Tried So Hard

Rating: 5.0


Just because I don't know
What I want to be
Shouldn't give you the right
To criticize me

I've done my best
And tried so hard
Just cause I don't know yet
Doesn't mean it's off to far

That shouldn't be
A reason to leave
Please don't go
I want you to believe

Help me out
Don't bring me down
I want you to be true
Not fake like a clown

Don't hurt me again
Been through to much
Don't want to deal with
Your lies and such

I know what I want to be
I want to be a writer
Or risk my life
And be a great fighter

There's to much to pick from
And not enough time
But please just promise me
You'll always be mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hey wow this poem shoes allot of emotion but it was so good... sad but good dont ever stop.

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Pandora Chaos 29 April 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! I liked this alot. It was kinda sad to me but i like sad poems. I give it a 10/10. ttfn

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