Dream Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Dream

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A dream kept alive,
somewhere trembling,
in the palms of consciousness,
summons each breath
from some unknown providence.
And gifts it to me,
in an unending hope
of its own fulfilment.
I know not what it is
and neither the one who dreams it...through me.
May be the God who created me.
People call this dream, life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajan Dhanaraj 11 November 2008

nice poem simple words.. good

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Very Good. Thanks for sharing. -Brie

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Pooja Ladyluck 12 November 2008

u hav expressed really deep thoughts in simple words.....lyked dis 1.....b'ful....thanx! ! !

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Tanvi Damle 04 December 2008

wow! ! it's beautiful :)

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Anjali Sinha 16 November 2008

wow neat and compact ++10 regards anju

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Moushumi moushumi 16 November 2008

Dream always haunt me & cheer others. hope the next of yours will be cheerful. very nice indeed.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 November 2008

A dream, that is life...your this dream is real, Sarvesh...good insightful write 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 November 2008

Significant............powerful..........eloquent...... beautifully penned! 10++++

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