Dream Poem by Briana Noel

Dream



I Dream of a day
When the World Will end.

and Jesus will come
And take us home.
To Heaven.
And We
Will live
in paradise(:
And we will never
Live in hell
and burn.
So please
If you are a sinner
and you dont care
at all
if you care about going to
heaven.
and have no fear
in hell
Please...Please
Go to church.
Learn about God
And 'The Plan'
And Why
Jesus died
For us.
Get saved.
And live your life
With jesus in
Your heart.
Life is short.
And eternaty in Hell
never ends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 09 May 2009

I quite agree Briana, except for one point. In the Bible it says that if you go into your closet and pray aloud, what you ask for will be granted. The closet is a metaphor and could be anywhere, walking down the street, sitting in your living room, having fun at the fair, in your mind. Church to me is filled with hypocrites who go to church only to be seen that they have done their Christian duty, but the Bible also warns about that too. Other than the church line I agree with the rest of this very well written and thought out poem. And yes Briana I am Chrisitian but I don't flaunt it or put it in other people's faces. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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