Dream Poem by Rainand Windy

Dream



For those admiration I have
I swear that you're the one
For those times I've spent
I dare to say this is right

Slowly, your voice enchanted me
Surely, your eyes hypnotize me
So deep, you keep me drowned
On the ocean we called love

But the storm we can't control
We're trapped within emotions
Force us to move aside
Or getting washed away by the tide

Truths are cruel, so true
So this dream we've experienced
Should we continue it?
Or now's the time to wake up?

Realize, Let go, Move on. Too much of hassles. Let's sleep and dream, just like usual.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 08 March 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.

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