Dreaming Poem by Alexis Rolon

Dreaming

Rating: 3.5


I wish I could be there where you are
I wish I could see you even though you are so far
You will always be in my dreams even though they dont come true
I lie and lie and lie so i dont get confused
I think and I wonder about you
Are you out there wishing it was all true
cause honestly I'm waiting on you
I cry and cry and cry because I know it is all a dream

If only I was not sleeping!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

You wonder but you have a true wish. There is no need to fear. Right dream brings reality and motivates life towards success.

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Lynn Glover 27 October 2009

Alexis, your poetry has promise, however, I found these mistakes in spelling. Thoe-Though (twice) were-where. Be more aware of the spelling in your poems. Keep writing, Lynnb

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