Dreaming Head Poem by Amit (amy)

Dreaming Head

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it is abt the girl i met..
wanna tell u how i felt..
thing which i first saw was her face..
i felt my heart has started to race..
she was the most beautiful among crowd..
nw i could hear my beat, it was so loud..
i wanted to talk, wanted to go near..
but my feet was trembling with fear..
don't know when the girl saw me..
she came near and said 'AMY! ! '...
i stood still, was surprised..
seeing her amazing brown eyes..
she was smiling and wearing blue..
my lips were stuck as if there was glue..
i wanted to say so many things..
words were not enough to decribe my feelings..
she hugged me and say I LOVE U..
hearing these 3 words made my mind blow...
my eyes opened, found frnd near my bed..
he said wake up dreaming head..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Dillon 03 July 2012

hi Amy, i like your style, feel your pain in your words, don't stay broken.

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