Dreamt That I Love You Poem by Ankita Sharma

Dreamt That I Love You

Rating: 4.5


As if awoken from a deep sleep;
I feel a deep liking for you

I sit and gaze at stars so blue;
And I feel I can breathe through you
Can close my eyes in silence too,
And I think I'm in love with you

I pick up a red rose
And I sit there and I gaze;
Drowning in it with a smile on my face

Feel feather-light kisses of wine on my head
Perhaps remembring the things that you said

And something in my breath,
Something in my heart-beat;
Saying I love you in tumbling repeat

I sit in corners and gaze at things;
See smiling people and birds with wings

I sit for hours and gaze at flowers;
The world fills up with magic powers

And feelings touching me with pure caresses,
I look at the enchantment the evening dresses

And as if awoken from a deep sleep;
I feel a deep liking for you
I sit and gaze at stars so blue;
And I feel I can breathe through you
Can close my eyes in silence too,
And I think I'm in love with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yassar Ali 21 March 2010

Beautiful poem describing the power of love, keep it up

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Kumud Ranjan 21 March 2010

beautiful poem... feelings in nice flow.. needs more integrity..but overall its a good one..9/10..

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ankita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2010

Dear Ankita, you have a rare ability to put your emotions in a picturesqe way. very nice liked it vry much. thank u for sharing.. would like to get ur comments on my poems. thank u

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Parth Parekh 31 March 2010

lovely poem ankita...........

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C. P. Sharma 29 March 2010

a wonderful love song sung through Nature. CP

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 March 2010

so soft like a breeze. this poem caresses the reader. 'As if awoken from a deep sleep; I feel a deep liking for you' loved it. thank you.

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