Are you drowning in your lies,
Falling so deep beyond the skies?
Trying to take back what you done?
It can be pointless to try to run.
Do you drown deep in your lies,
Letting the stars fill your eyes?
Glistening so bright,
In the moons early light,
Bringing the glare of the spirits deadly stare,
You try to pretend its not there.
It always is,
Your followed everywhere.
Do you drown beyond the ground,
Into a pit of continuous lies?
There’s nothing there, but the souls dead lives,
But knowing you, you wouldn’t care.
wow....passionately put but hard message.... u write very well.. be happy :)
very interesting poem. well penned about a negative aspect of a human being....
Another good emotion released Samantha! ! ! wish you can come some brighter poem, talk about happiness..i wonder how it sounds...try write some and sure it will attract many readers! ! ! OK? _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written for so young a poet. Off to a good start. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline