Early Dusk Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Early Dusk

Rating: 5.0


Silence is of a new kind
Mingled with chilly exhalation
Of the early dusk
Everything has been written
Along the lines of the horizon
As the sun sinks into anonymity
While the moon and the stars
Steal the prime time show

Merging into the darkness feels good
To the heart that has waited long
To find words beyond cliches
I am a seeker in the darkness
No wonder I am still searching
For what I cannot define
May be somewhere some day
We decode the message of silence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 October 2022

It's G-d telling us to slow down Bravo!

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 October 2022

Great write! Five stars xx

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Beautiful poem. " May be somewhere some day /We decode the message of silence." Exactly, Nosheen! It is Silence that carries the most profound messages, and decoding them is the toughest task.

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Part 2. Your poem, as always is of "words beyond cliches". Enjoyed reading this nice poem. Top score. MyFavourites.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2022

You are a gifted poetess. I like your flawless poems like this one. I am not competent enough to comprehend the depth of your poetry. Please continue without any fear or favour. It's a good platform, explore the positive dimensions of it. All the best.

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Sandra Feldman 07 November 2022

The 'essage of Silence'

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Sandra Feldman 07 November 2022

'Decoding the message of Silence', what a metaphor

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2022

Still searching are great and fascinating moments, but when finally decoded would not be interesting anymore. Finest poem to read, true enjoyable.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2022

CONGRATULATIONS, dear NOsheen, your magnificent poem is still on Rank 46 today. of the List of Best Poems of Member Poets of PH.5 Stars TOP Score.

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This poem is ranked #46 in the 100 best poems of members featured on PoemHunter, today. Congratulations, Nosheen. You deserve the recognition, no doubt. Congratulations

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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