Ecg Of Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ecg Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Peaks-valleys around
emotions going up-down
heartbeat working fine.

Friday, October 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This haiku is on ECG report for heart and mind engaged in high thinking.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2015

Well, if heartbeat is working fine, take it easy....................

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2015

Without any ups and downs life will be in grave......Straight line in ECG means heart is not working, co-relation between heart and mind and life and death very well explore, Asimji...Liked your sense of thinking.10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 October 2015

Verily, life goes on smoothly in all the ups and downs in life when one works out in life.

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Kelly Kurt 09 October 2015

Very well done. a 10!

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