Marie Shine

Gold Star - 9,860 Points (April 27th,1950 / Listowel. Co. Kerry)

Ecstasy. - Poem by Marie Shine

When I awoke this morning
The scent of you filled my senses
in longing...
for your sweet kisses
I ached to hold you
be embraced in your arms

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Ecstasy. by Marie Shine

  • Gold Star - 41,088 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/27/2015 12:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, dipped in love, every word spills true meaning of love....10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,619 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2015 10:53:00 PM)

    A Doll of Clay (Being inspired by Marie Shine's poem Ecstasy)

    Thanks for relieving me from cares.
    I shall wait for you in the next nightmares.
    Thanks for relieving me from the pains.
    I don't mind your given stains,
    The ecstasy that you provide,
    is followed by a will to abide
    the fatigues of a new and tiring day,
    after all I'm a doll of helpless clay!
    Embraced in the arms let me forget the misses,
    Come on sweetheart it; s a moment of kisses!

    (Thanks Marie Shine, your poem is nice and inspiring, and I reacted with a poem.) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,944 Points Tanu Mannah (11/15/2015 12:49:00 AM)

    Sweet... And soft... Love it.. Thanks and love dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 376 Points Freni Karaluthara (10/28/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    I admire this Poem simple in style and content. Everybody in this word experience this Ecstasy, But you have put into nice words. I wish that all may take some moments to think about this experience and try to realize this soothing experiences in life. Thanks for sharing this poem and experience. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,405 Points Pamela Sinicrope (10/3/2015 3:27:00 PM)

    This poem reminded me a little of a poem by Fabrizio Frosini, with regard to the power of scent to trigger emotions and memories. Here, however, the memory is completely intact with the experience of love and ecstasy. Another lovely poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Sranisha Francis (9/18/2015 4:01:00 PM)

    for your sweet kisses.. i like your poem . thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,668 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (9/17/2015 9:08:00 AM)

    I ached to hold you
    be embraced in your arms
    Ecstasy! love in ecstatic terms dear Marieeee. i sense your heart's intense desire. a great poem by it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,872 Points Mr. Agape (5/28/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Wow! You are the bomb (that's good here)
    your really got it goin' on
    when your pencil hits the paper
    there is no way you do taper
    You lob those words perfectly
    It's almost sexually! ! ! lol (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,860 Points Marie Shine (4/27/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    *Sunprincess* Thank you for your comment on my poem.
    You totally misinterpreted my writing and concentrated on the title. I am Irish. I do NOT do drugs, I NEVER did drugs and the ecstasy referred to in my poem is the natural high which comes from loving someone sooooooo deeply. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (4/22/2014 3:55:00 AM)

    , , , a short poem to explain such deep feelings, , , ,
    nice poem, , , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (4/13/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    Love oozes from your pen expressed with panache! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/11/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    a short and sweet feels you with ectasy and pleasure too.lovely write my dear Marie.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,753 Points Daniel Brick (4/10/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    This poem is short and sweet. And it does not need another line, image or word. In a volume of love poems this one could be a kind of summary poem ending one section of poems before shifting gears to another aspect of the experience of human love. As I've been reading your poems I find myself editing a book of them, and the order of the poems is crucial for their full impact. There is often hidden reserves of energy in a poem. One way to release that stored energy is to place the poem in context with others. Another is to read it aloud - perhaps with musical accompaniment! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 27, 2014

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