Eddies Of Wind Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Eddies Of Wind

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Havocs and whisling sounds
Thunder accross my mind
My passion whirls
The rustling   noise
Filling my head
I step o n the cascade
And watch the brittle bones
Cursed for the abondened pride.
I feel you are vowed
To chase my simple demise.

Sunday, April 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: weather
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 April 2015

A deep sublime poem in poetic muse and wordings. Long live the poets though. Well written poet. I couldnt see your message due to some site issues probs but thanx i got yor comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 April 2015

An amazing short poem, really wonderful.........................10

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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