Eden Poem by Orange Scribbles

Eden

Rating: 5.0


Name from a garden
Face from a flower
Heart made of gold
And eyes that truly glitters

Smile that radiates joy
Laughter that expresses glee
Actions that shows love
A gift, indeed, from up above

People you meet
Says you are a blessing
In the midst of their lives
That’s rather depressing

Eden, such a great name
You and love means the same
Passion’s like a burning flame
Seeking happiness and never fame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 31 December 2013

I agree with Luis...maybe you can rephrase it with That's quite impressing

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