Effective Words Poem by Bree Swart

Effective Words

Rating: 5.0


Your words constantly echoing through
my mind.

They are telling my heart a thousand
lies.

I'm stuck between the do or die.

Just give me time to unwind.-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent James Turner 14 July 2008

not a bad little poem, i wanted more of it know it seems you had much to say but limited it to just a few lines.......... maybe in order for the title to hold true 'effective words' you needed to hold back, contain and steer clear of over expressing the thought. nice work although a little short regards Vincent

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