Eldest Poem by Susan Lacovara

Eldest

Rating: 5.0


Collect bottled time
A wine to stain life's fabric
Brother, mine, vintage

Wednesday, March 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: brother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
03/06/19: For Robert, my oldest brother, to turn sixty-one, tomorrow.
A lifetime shared in growth and love, we are the same children of long ago Springtime. Happy Birthday my brother, I love you with all my heart.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 06 March 2019

Oh, what a sweet way of showing love to the eldest brother. I wish I had a sister like you, who would wish me like this in remembering the sweet 'Springtime' of growing together! For the deep love and the feelings expressed in just three lines, I give this poem a 10/10.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 March 2019

Sweet one. Loved the way you show your love to your brother.

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