David Harris

Bronze Star - 2,573 Points (18 June 1945 / Bradfield, England)

Empty Feeling Down Deep Inside - Poem by David Harris

Sometimes we get an empty feeling
down deep inside of us
that we are so alone,
no friends, and no family.
We know it isn’t so,
but that empty feeling,
it still remains to taunt us.
Why we’ll never know.
We could be in a crowded room
and that feeling still resides.
You know that you are not alone,
but you still feel that
empty feeling down deep inside.

18 February 2008


Comments about Empty Feeling Down Deep Inside by David Harris

  • Rookie Anita Atina (3/15/2008 10:34:00 AM)

    David,

    Feeling empty and lonely is as universal as the emotion of love - and you've tapped into this rich tapestry with inimitable style

    Cheers
    Anita (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 52,777 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/15/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more!
    I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,777 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/15/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    Yup...i confess...been there too...in fact been there three or four or more!
    I think'll go back to sleep, now & have weird dreams...lol! Excellent Work, David!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (3/15/2008 4:38:00 AM)

    Poignant penning D. Only, sometimes, the feeling IS true. t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lilac Wine (3/15/2008 4:21:00 AM)

    I know this feeling only too well....surrounded by family and friends i still feel alone.....WHY! ! ! ! ...

    Thank u for sharing
    love n stuff
    lilac
    XXXXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (3/15/2008 3:44:00 AM)

    Emptyness is a lonley place, without some one to fill the space with loving grace.. Andy 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 15, 2008



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