Empty Heart Poem by tabasom azadee
Empty Heart
Sometimes everything is ok
And you don't need any special thing for your life
But in you heart something is wrong
Something is empty!
What is that?
Question and question
It's answer is too clear to think about that! yes love
But something that is not clear is that who is your lover?
In my life
I find him
A flower that dance with you like a butterfly in life garden
tabasom
line 6: I'm not sure of the meaning here. line 7: should read 'Its', not 'it's'. line 8: I wouldn't use the second 'that', though I guess it's ok.
line 3: 'you' to 'your' I depend on proofreading to catch (most of) my 'errors'. : ) bri
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5/2/2024 3:12:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
And line 11: I'd uses 'dances'. I like the poem, and with more proofreading and perhaps of English [ I THINK English is not your 'main language' ] I would not find myself paying so much attention to English 'errors'. : ) bri