Every Thing Is Exciting! Poem by tabasom azadee

Every Thing Is Exciting!



Hi sky!
Hi stars!
How are you flowers?
Every thing is like a dream if you open your eyes in another way.
Hey moon! Are you ok?
Don't worry if you don't have enough money to buy a tower.
Just smile at flowers and smell them and get energy for whole of a hard day!
God is generous.
God gives us sky, moon, stars and especially flowers to understand life is exciting.
Every time that I see flowers, it's hard for me to leave them.
They are wonderful!
Don't lose God gifts easily.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 20 July 2019

this is a very optimistic. i hope you always have flowers and the dear moon to comfort you! ! ! " God give us sky" i suggest: " gives" or " gave" . bri :)

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