Empty Heart's Shadows Poem by Bonnie Collins

Empty Heart's Shadows

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Keep my love safe and warm dont
let anyone touch the part that only
belongs to you with a hidden
door inwhich we each have a key

As life goes on and the age of our
silver valley is upon us we each wonder
and look back even more so, as that
was THEN and this is NOW

Now is the time we each live a life without
the love our hearts once found with the innocence
of yesterday, but with a new conception, that
till death, we will vow to love one another if only
in our empty hearts shadows...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2008

Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2008

Impressive stanzaec structure....mellifluous movement throughout...and Bonnie lass, i do believe you have a productive penchant for passsion's pour. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Andrew Blakemore 08 October 2008

A love poem of the greatest quality Bonnie. Your work is always so touching and heartfelt. Love, Andrew x

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Stacey Watts 03 October 2008

Wow another wonderful piece from you as always your words pour into love on the paper.. Very good read.

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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