Empty Spaces Poem by Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Empty Spaces

Rating: 4.0


there are many things in life
that can make the heart
be more
of a whole

most spaces you need to understand
and fill for yourself
some are filled only
by love
given to another

when you left
you took that part of me
i can live without it
but without it
i can't know happiness
or feel complete

return the piece of my heart
you stole
its mine to give
never yours to keep

you left me
with an empty space
return what you stole
so that the empty space
can become whole


10 September 2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mathew Lewis 30 May 2006

I really like this poem. It sits with you and gets under your skin. And I really like the lack of capitalisation as well. Just like empty spaces with the words. Or maybe I'm just bein too analytical. Nice poem though.: 0)

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Cj Heck 19 October 2005

This is so heartfelt and beautiful, Stephanie. Ahhh, love... the most beautiful of emotions and the most heartbreaking. Warmest regards, CJ

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allan james saywell 12 September 2005

i have made a comment in the forum for you to look at, dont be late you got eight poetry blob

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Mary Nagy 12 September 2005

Hate to say the ol' 'Time heals all wounds' cliche but truly it does help the heart heal as well. Nice poem. sincerely, Mary

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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