Enclosures Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Enclosures



It...
(an unfathomable wrong,
an unforgettable song,
a friend’s betrayal,
a grievous tale,
a withholding of care,
shame laid bare,
growing old,
love grown cold,
your leaving,
my grieving)
...hurts.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Harskamp 26 September 2006

alright, this was slightly creative in its structure, but the ryhme was as smooth as it could have been.

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Alex Nodopaka 28 April 2006

Creative. I'd leave a space between the first & last word.

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Brian Dorn 20 April 2006

Sonny, I like the format of your poem... very creative! Brian

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