(06/19/1992 / Denver)

What do you think this poem is about?

Energy

Can you feel the energy?
The twisting turning in the pits of my stomach
The acheing in my heart
Feeling like the bottom is falling out
I think I'll fly before my twitching itching bone house gets to catch up
I want to leave it behind
Leave my flesh sealed entrapment of what ifs and societies warm/cold suffocating jail cell
I want to fly
Humanity based on lies, money and superficial views
Let me fly
Let me ride into the stars on fire flys
Let me cry
Let me live, laugh and die.

Submitted: Friday, October 12, 2012
Edited: Friday, October 19, 2012

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Not a suicide poem just one I was feeling trapped by my body.

Comments about this poem (Energy by Dominique Abeyta )

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/12/2012 11:32:00 PM)

    When we are happy we may feel that we are flying in the sky, as you want in this poem. the concept is good!

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