Energy Poem by Dominique Abeyta

Energy



Can you feel the energy?
The twisting turning in the pits of my stomach
The aching in my heart
Feeling like the bottom is falling out
I think I'll fly before my twitching itching bone house gets to catch up
I want to leave it behind
Leave my flesh sealed entrapment of what ifs and societies warm/cold suffocating jail cell
I want to fly
Humanity based on lies, money and superficial views
Let me fly
Let me ride into the stars on fire fly's
Let me cry
Let me live, laugh and die.

Friday, October 12, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not a suicide poem just one I was feeling trapped by my body.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 October 2012

When we are happy we may feel that we are flying in the sky, as you want in this poem. the concept is good!

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