Enjoy The Rave Poem by Miran Ishaq

Enjoy The Rave

Rating: 5.0


When I look at the sky,
It looks back with a dreary gaze.

What are you doing boy?
With the entire universe before you;
Why are you wasting your time?
Why are your aspirations so shoal?

This universe is yours to have.
Straighten up and be brave.
Although, you certainly are going to end up in a grave,
But till then enjoy the rave.

Monday, September 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Miran. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2017

Wonderful poem..so briefly narrated! Score..10+

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