Treasure Island

hazem al jaber

(21 may 1965 / kuwait)

Enough silence...


Enough silence...







why that silence...

your silence killing me..

why...

please tell me why...

got suddenly silent...

with no reason you got...

why you live into your silences....

got out of my temper...

can`t bear it...

me and my patient yelling and calling you...

don`t keep so long with your silence..

don`t keep me feel pains...

enough suffering...

its so long nights...

enough, please talk...

here i am hearing you...

please talk my sweetheart..

don`t keep me suffering my long darkest nights...





by: hazem02@yahoo.com

Submitted: Monday, August 17, 2009

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (8/17/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    This poem captures the pathos of silence that quietly kills ones spirit.I like this poem..the narrator must yell out ENOUGH OF THE NOISE I CAN'T HEAR! this I give a 9 (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (8/17/2009 5:01:00 PM)

    This is so touching..sweet words yet their is sadness in feelings..
    Your 'love' runs off?
    you really write so romantically..and sweet...
    10+++ for this, my friend..


    lovelots,

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Kristen Brown (8/17/2009 4:07:00 PM)

    Sounds like someone you deeply care for suddenly cut off all communication. I've been through that, it sucks. They act like you suddenly don't exist and it's killing you inside. You hope and pray that the pain goes away but it doesn't. The only thing that would sooth the bleeding heart, would be the voice of the one you long for.

    I hope that helps in some way.
    Until next we meet (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (8/17/2009 6:51:00 AM)

    wonderful cognitive metaphor:
    ''your silence killing me..''
    wonderful, but very sad lyrical poem...........10+++++ (Report) Reply

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