As I wake up in the morning I saw the sunshine in the window As I go into the garden, I saw the flowers as they grow.
The trees in the mountain Gives us fresh air to inhale, It gives us water every day, And fulfilling life in every way.
How beautiful surroundings we have, Its a gift from up above, May you be thankful for what you have And share the blessings of a loving god.
Today is a great day, It's a love-fulfilling way, Its because I have to stay, That god is my guide all the way.
I give 4 stars, but NOT for the grammar; I believe carelessness, lack of sufficient proofreading & probably some inexperience using English leaves the poem 'sprinkled' with grammatical errors. But is quite worthy of being a Member Poem of the Day. : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is 'safe to publish' on PH, AND I'm sure many readers will enjoy it! bri : ) ****