Envisioning Forever Poem by Mary Nagy

Envisioning Forever



Envisioning forever makes the struggles seem worthwhile.
It helps me keep on running even through the roughest mile.

Sometimes it seems like giving up is all that I can do...
and then I envision forever and I'm always there...with you.

The worries of our basic needs and struggles of each day
may sometimes cloud my judgement but those clouds I brush away.

It's hard to not lose focus when I'm down and need to cry
but envisioning forever gives me reason to still try.

I want to be together, in a cabin in the woods.
I want to have to drive for miles to stock up on our goods.

Envisioning forever there is always me and you.
That's what keeps me going and helps to pull me through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Jennett 10 October 2005

As promised Mary I am reading all your poems and the fact that I am still reading says a lot for your apt expression. and the sentiment expressed in everything so far. However I feel it's time to change your meter. It's a fruitful furrow but don't plough it down to bedrock Sincerely

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Don Stratford 16 September 2005

Where fantasy and reality are part of ones life I like this Don S

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Thomas Viruvelil 11 September 2005

Hoping against reasoning is pain itself.When you do not see anything bright coming up in days to come how do you get strength to go on? You naturally tend to expect the worst and not the better regards

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Tears In Rain 10 September 2005

Sometimes envisioning forever does exactly the opposite for me. How much longer must I weather this storm, fight the good fight. Will I have my reprieve? My envisioning forever demands even greater will to go on. Still I revel in the contrast you provide me here.

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