Thomas Viruvelil

Rookie (17.05.71 / Cochin, Kerala state, India)

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Architect and management Consultant by profession.Have been writing poems for sometime on love, frustrations and death. more »

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  • Rookie Linda Jenkinson (10/18/2005 9:58:00 AM)

    i enjoyed reading your poems very much, it is rare indeed this love you have for smi...i would dearly love to read more...maybe you could write about other aspects of your life and situation...best wishes and please keep writing...linda xxx

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gillian.E. Shaw (9/21/2005 3:11:00 AM)

    Now you have written of your feelings and they are down on paper perhaps you should take a step back and write in more generalized terms. One can identify with feelings. However the human condition in general is something more solid and may add more weight and credibility to your poetry. To expand in order to express, to have the ability to move on will be a positive step. The focus then, should be more on form (which needs exploring) rather than on content.

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (9/8/2005 11:56:00 AM)

    Thomas, I have read all of your poems. They are very lovely. You are obviously very much in love with Smi. If she even loves you half as much as you do her, you will both be very happy. Very sweet to have such love and passion. I would be interested to read if you write poetry on other topics though? I'll keep my eye out for your work. Sincerely, Mary

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Best Poem of Thomas Viruvelil

Be With Me Always

Looking at your face
seeing those whisphering eyes
feeling you close to me
I simply do not know
how I will ever be able to
live without seeing you
without talking to you
without you close to me.
Death will definitely
better than life without you.
You have become part of me
I breathe feel think live
Smi
I kept that kerchief
close very close
to me
for a whole day when you were not with me.
I felt as if a part of you
with me
with your body odour
rubbed by that kerchief with me.
Oh my God
I never thought loving can be a ...

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