Thomas Viruvelil

Rookie (17.05.71 / Cochin, Kerala state, India)

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Architect and management Consultant by profession.Have been writing poems for sometime on love, frustrations and death. more »

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  • Rookie Linda Jenkinson (10/18/2005 9:58:00 AM)

    i enjoyed reading your poems very much, it is rare indeed this love you have for smi...i would dearly love to read more...maybe you could write about other aspects of your life and wishes and please keep writing...linda xxx

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gillian.E. Shaw (9/21/2005 3:11:00 AM)

    Now you have written of your feelings and they are down on paper perhaps you should take a step back and write in more generalized terms. One can identify with feelings. However the human condition in general is something more solid and may add more weight and credibility to your poetry. To expand in order to express, to have the ability to move on will be a positive step. The focus then, should be more on form (which needs exploring) rather than on content.

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (9/8/2005 11:56:00 AM)

    Thomas, I have read all of your poems. They are very lovely. You are obviously very much in love with Smi. If she even loves you half as much as you do her, you will both be very happy. Very sweet to have such love and passion. I would be interested to read if you write poetry on other topics though? I'll keep my eye out for your work. Sincerely, Mary

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Best Poem of Thomas Viruvelil

Walking Close To Green Paddy Fields

As days pass by
you become more sweet
more beautiful
more lovable.
Is love brewing inside me is making me
Intoxicated with smitha?
Even after seeing your face with clear skin,
ever smiling wide eyes
I feel like sitting close, looking at your eyes
as if those twinkling eyes can give me
happiness unknown forever.
In my dreams I imagine
gently softly touching every bit of your body
with my lips
making your body feel my love
and feel a bit of love for me.
That day when we waited by the side of that paddy field
have you not heard the paddy leaves...

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