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Epic Smile

Time slows;
then stops.
You have an epic smile,
shining brightly to challenge the sun.

You laugh with your soul,
eyes sparkling in the light.
You have an epic smile,
one I will never forget.

My heart leaps at your voice,
a smile shattering the gloom of life.
You have an epic smile,
brighter than a thousand suns.

I will think of you often,
though truthfully I already do.
You have an epic smile, my muse,
one that will always be with me.

Submitted: Sunday, October 18, 2009
Edited: Monday, October 19, 2009


Comments about this poem (Epic Smile by Brian Hinckley )

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  • Lauren A (5/31/2012 11:36:00 AM)

    This reminds me of a boy I know... First 2 lines last stanza, I love it.

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  • januel l (10/18/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    beautiful, good work

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