I only wanted kitchen curtains
And your love
Both to calmly sway
In the sunsetting breeze of June
I would be content
Washing dinner dishes
While you dried your hands in my hair
Evening would be the perfect place
To spread out the picnic of passion
In a small room to house our big dreams
I never got around to buying kitchen curtains
Instead the slatted bland blinds remain
And remain drawn as the slivers from sunset
Try to limbo dance their way in
I am left with less than the interior design
I had so perfectly planned
And left with even less of the design I had
For allowing your love into the interior
Of my heart
Impressive crafting, Susan...Your short, crisp and tight linage creates a stanzaic structure that moves mellifluously throughout the work...Solid Penning ~FjR~
sorrows stains in heart as blood stains in clothes- good penning
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The haunting of the everyday artifacts of routine living so effectively highlight the pain and emptiness of a broken heart. Simply superb; sent a chilling wave of resonance back into the deep chambers of my heart where a few scars lie dormant. To love, and its aftermath! :)