Epitaph For Love Poem by Susan Lacovara

Epitaph For Love



I only wanted kitchen curtains
And your love
Both to calmly sway
In the sunsetting breeze of June

I would be content
Washing dinner dishes
While you dried your hands in my hair

Evening would be the perfect place
To spread out the picnic of passion
In a small room to house our big dreams

I never got around to buying kitchen curtains
Instead the slatted bland blinds remain
And remain drawn as the slivers from sunset
Try to limbo dance their way in

I am left with less than the interior design
I had so perfectly planned
And left with even less of the design I had
For allowing your love into the interior
Of my heart

Sunday, June 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbroken
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(06/28/15) if sorrow could be changed as easily as curtains...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 21 November 2016

The haunting of the everyday artifacts of routine living so effectively highlight the pain and emptiness of a broken heart. Simply superb; sent a chilling wave of resonance back into the deep chambers of my heart where a few scars lie dormant. To love, and its aftermath! :)

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Impressive crafting, Susan...Your short, crisp and tight linage creates a stanzaic structure that moves mellifluously throughout the work...Solid Penning ~FjR~

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 June 2015

sorrows stains in heart as blood stains in clothes- good penning

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