Ere The Sunsets Poem by me poet yeps poet

Ere The Sunsets

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I sail away
in the ship
as it goes
in search of my love

hope to find him
ere the sunsets
as he may by then be
below the fathoms
of the sea

seeing himself bereft of me
let my oarsman make haste
as we have little time to waste

the sun is about to set
as the storm threatens too
how will my lover
without me do

I wonder too
do you

Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 07 September 2017

A sweet and beautiful poem that at once touches the heart of a reader.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 October 2016

I sail away in the ship as it goes in search of my love hope to find him ere the sunsets as he may by then be below the fathoms of the sea seeing himself bereft of me let my oarsman make haste as we have little time to waste the sun is about to set as the storm threatens too how will my lover without me do I wonder too do you MODIFY PLEASE AS PER RANJISH the sun is about to set / as the storm threatens too how will my lover / without me do / I wonder too / do you

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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2016

Really a lovely sweet poem reflecting the anxiety and suspense of a lover who is looking for his partner in all possible locations. Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote as under: the sun is about to set / as the storm threatens too how will my lover / without me do / I wonder too / do you

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