Erosion Poem by Conrad Seegert

Erosion

Rating: 5.0


The old gray building
That is now aged and broken
Was once someone's home

Thursday, May 18, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: timeless,old,age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 17 October 2023

Great poetic and human feel in 3 very heartfelt and graphic verses that imply so very much! Good job

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Bri Edwards 20 May 2023

This poem is tempting BUT couldn't you have spared time and effort to expand it? ha! Welcome, 'New Poet', to PH, with its pros and cons for all, and it's STILL FREE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Yay! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 20 May 2023

You could also be describing a person's body or life. I see no PH bio. : ( I read the first several line of each of your poems, and they all were tempting me to read.

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Sandra Feldman 19 May 2023

Nostalgia humanizad and at its best!

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