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persian khushi

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Eternal Embrace


Their fevered lips leaving thrilling trails of moist rippling quakes
In the most fulfilling embrace true love can find
With words endearing as heaven smiles on them
Depth of their love illuminating their souls
Eternal moments in ecstasy of love
Having mastered trials and tribulation
Hand in hand together
Breathing each other
Hearts bound
Forever

Submitted: Wednesday, May 29, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 05, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

01/04/13

Out of the Box Ch allenge # 50

© 2013 persiankhushi (All rights reserved)

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (6/5/2013 6:45:00 AM)

    The poem has been written, seems, on the heat of emotion that you have poured down your heart in the state of rapture. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/30/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Ecstasy of emotion and true love expressed with simplicity and grace and the shape and structure of the poem add to it's themes. (Report) Reply

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