Evening Poem by Don Pearson

Evening

Rating: 5.0


Even while I lay in the sun
I remembered Winter’s threat
and frozen tears.

Even so, that first evening
I was detached from the
desolation.

Even when I turned from leaving
I dismissed the echoes
As too distant.

Even holes torn in my old coat
Which had let in the cold blasts
Were forgotten.

Even the cries in the night-time,
A warning of futures past,
I left unheard.

Even as the storms broke on us
And floods swept us away
Should I have run?

Even though I lost you out there
And friends called off the search
I sought you still.

Even then, as I gave up hope
You found me, gave us strength,
Saw our path home.

Even lying here exhausted,
Are we on the mainland
Or an island?

Apr 2001

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 16 September 2008

Love the double-meaning of the title -; and the question at the end line is the all important surprise ending. A very good piece. fondlly from Fay with a tenner for this.

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