Evil Rapture Poem by Soul Writer

Evil Rapture

Rating: 5.0


Cant believe she did that
The bitch turned into a rat

Had her under my roof, protected her for 3 years
And all i have to show 4 it are empty tears

And a court case
Thats how the do it in my race
All i wanted to do was teach
All she did in the end was leech

Money...
Tme...
My good nature...
She turned into a evil Rapture

Praying on my good heart
Did a good job of tearing it apart

But im a Soulja
And i don't hide and run 4 cover
Especially not from the Rapture and her witch of a mother

I'm preparing to draw my sword
And take the head off the Rapture
That will be the kodak moment will capture

It will be slow and she will endure much pain
I yern 2 c blood drawn from her vains

And i the end when im asked
'what caused this destruction to begin....? '

My response
'It wasn't me... twas the beast within....'
And how is this destruction going to stop?
When i witness the last blood drop.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 18 January 2008

Interesting for sure, it certainly displays how upset you are with this person, unless of course your just writing a made up story. However if this person really did hurt you in this manner, you did a good job of explaining it in poetic manner so to speak. I wouldn't waste my precious time a person like this of course, it just takes up too much good energy that could be well spent elsewhere. Ever heard the saying 'What goes round comes round', it works every time and you don't have to do a thing except sit back and watch it happen, then you have the pleasure of saying it. Excellent write once again and I agree with my friend David, interesting. Melvina

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David Harris 19 June 2007

Ramon, what an interesting write. Top Marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Anita Blake 30 May 2007

intense, amazing write.lol love it

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