Excuses Poem by Bratzo

Excuses



Side by side
pop-corn perhaps?
Our hands feel each other...
...a film is my excuse
we are alone at last.

What is yours?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. Bianca 16 February 2010

The poem shows the shyness of the two persona with a clear imagery. Lovely ending with a question; great poem!

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