Exorcism Poem by Masha Danevasha

Exorcism

Rating: 5.0


The kiss long awaited now tastes of cheap beer
And laughter replaces hurt ego's tears
The tryst is called off under silly pretext
The weight dissipates and lungs takes a full breath

There'll be no second chances
You have aced final test
Say goodbye to this demon
Make room for the next

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 16 April 2007

Nicly done young Lady.......so few words yet strong content captures the beauty of the embodyed poetics........10x10....

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Chuck Audette 04 April 2007

Liked this, nice rhyming. I have one on exorcism, too: 'I'm behind in my payments on that exorcist service call'. Hope you like it. -chuck

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Original Unknown Girl 04 April 2007

Wowser Masha! ! ! This is a very powerful write! ! So, you had to put him/you to the test first? Nothing wrong in that my dear, seems like you have this jackass right where you need him! HG: -) xx

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